Well, here it is. I am almost sure I have finished. I will put it up in the studio for a week or two before I sign it in case something jumps out at me. I have to say his eyes look very strange in the photo, but not in the painting itself. A critique from a friend would be useful!
However – there is always an however – I am dissatisfied that I couldn’t make more of it. It’s OK as far as it goes, not without input from me, especially in the colour sense, but I would like to try again and make it less representational. I think I will try mixed media, using “Collage, Colour and Texture in Painting” by Mike Bernard and Robin Capon, mentioned in my New Year post, as my guide. I am hoping to make something with more atmosphere, more mystery, something less obvious. This will not be a quick exercise as I will be well into personally uncharted territory. Wish me luck!
I worked on her face first in more detail. If you remember the mouth was very loosely indicated, her nose was twisted, and her hair was a rather dull brown, so plenty to do.
I think I’ve done reasonable well here – she looks altogether more human. Although I have made corrections, I haven’t lost the vigour of the brush strokes, and have achieved more successful tones. The upper lip is still too light, and I would like a more nuanced tonal balance around the eyes.
Then, I tackled her hair which is more auburn than brown or red. A touch of alizarin in the mix seemed to do the trick. I know the hair is a bit dome-like, but that was how it was done in those days – I know, I had one too! Even so the carefully sculpted side curl is too thick. It needs to be more airy.
I turned to him – at least he now has a nose and mouth, and they are believable. His eyes are still too narrow and almond shaped. The modelling on the face is not that strange colour in actuality ( I haven’t worked out the vagaries of my camera yet). Both faces are still rather flat, so I need to attend to the shading again. Then there is the matter of making sure they both have space in the painting to be more than cardboard cutouts. Still progress has been made.
Things started well. I began by painting the darker areas using Sepia and Chrome Green to give some variation and depth, suggesting shadows where one figure overlapped the other as well as the facial ones already indicated. A few marks represented folds in clothing, etc. By working over the whole painting in this way, I am able to maintain the integrity of a joint portrait. I was enjoying the process and happy with the result.
The next visit was a mistake – hurried and thoughtless, more interested in moving the painting on than in doing so successfully! and this is the result. I could have wept. They look as if they have a serious skin complaint! On the up side, his jacket looks the right colour, and I haven’t obliterated all the careful drawing, but that was a definite lesson in not trying to hurry because there is only a short time available at this moment. Better to leave it and tackle it when things are more serene. So that is what I did – and was rewarded by an altogether kinder painting.
I started by painting the background, partly to paint myself in and partly to reduce the amount of white canvas glaring at me. I may have used too bright a colour, but I can adjust that in time, and it does the job right now. The painting looks better even without working on the faces, so it has encouraged me to continue. Indeed, I rarely bin anything until it’s finished – sometimes you can surprise yourself!
Then I tried again on the faces and hair. I feel much happier now. They are still a bit spotty but altogether warmer, more friendly. The shading is better balanced and the eyes of both are good for this stage. Her nose is twisted! and both mouths sulky, so more work there. Her muted green dress fits the colour scheme, his shirt less inclined to dominate the picture. Progress.
You may remember these two photos in my New Year post. They are of my friends when young! At the time, they didn’t know each other and even if they had, I don’t think they would have thought of a painted portrait. However shortly after, they met and married, and are still joyfully and happily married.
So my idea was to paint a joint portrait to celebrate that splendid day (and all the intervening years) by putting the two together. There are some concerns – the photos are not the same scale, and I needed to find a way of stitching the two photos together. I have chosen a conventional pose. As they are both facing the same way it seemed the best answer, and he really is taller than her even allowing for the bouffant hairdo!
I then marked a vertical line for the centre of each face about 10 inches long and drew the outline of the head and shoulders, so as to equalise the scale, in using sepia paint and a small thin brush. A quick scrub of dilute paint marked in the main shadows – I’m using the lighting on her photo as his is pretty washed out – and I think I have made a good start .
I had been wondering what to do about the floor. The pale colour made the picture top heavy so I searched around for something darker (richer?). The original photo of the robed figures had a dark crimson carpet, highly patterned, which might fit the bill. Certainly, the colour anchors the picture effectively.
I have moved things around too. The soup plate reel has gone but what should I use to fill the space? Much cogitation had led me to realise that I had no fruit in the picture: glass, silver, fur, cloth, flowers, rubber, velvet, silk ribbon, wood a-plenty, but no fruit. So, I added some grapes – they have relevance in making wine which both my gentlemen like. and they help the eye to move around the picture.
The noisy exciting colours of “Fanatic” in full sail are counter-balanced by the quieter, darker gleams of polished wood, though the colour of two of the glasses echoes more deeply the scurrying waves. The chair is more substantial now, walnut perhaps, with a velvety cushion bearing the score, and the silver rose of “Der Rosenkavelier”. The wellies are shorter, and the robes more detailed, though in the heat of the moment, the Master lost his Chain of Office. I am delighted with the ribbon on Brian’s robe while the fur is asking to be stroked. Even the fishing rod is now slender, ready for the lake.
It was this cheerful Lady who made me want to try portrait painting again. She has such a wonderful smile. Her neck scarf is light and diaphanous, her head scarf is brightly coloured and patterned and the light on her face so attractive that she cried out for me to make the attempt.
I use pastels for portraits quite often. It’s something to do with the immediacy of pastel painting, no brush, no water, no oil, between you and the tone in your hand and on the paper. With that immediacy comes an intimacy between you and your subject unbroken by the need mix colour. If, as I do, you collect the pastels you use on a separate tray, then your tonal range is to hand. It makes life so much easier!
I began by lightly drawing the layout with a pastel pencil so that I knew I had the proportions correctly placed, then drifted in the darks. Her eyes are quite deep-set, as are the smile lines round her mouth. The shadow under her chin, the result of top lighting, defined the face beautifully. A quick splash of colour on the scarves set the colour balance. Even that much painting brought her face alive – to the extent that I was reluctant to proceed.
Fortunately, when I looked at her the next day, she drew me in, so I worked on the midtones of her face, softening the contours, trying to tease out the smile. The eyes have it, though, for if they don’t smile, no amount of “grin” will help. I have a tendency to overwork eyes in a concentrated effort to get them “right” so I made a conscious decision to do as little as necessary and am happy with the result. A mouth with teeth is another trap for the unwary, but this isn’t the first grin I have painted. The trick is to paint it in patches of colour and tone so that it appears, rather than drawing “a mouth” and “teeth” as if they were separate from the rest of the face.
The highlights on her cheeks, chin and brow were quickly completed. Then there was only the finishing off to do, the light on her bottom lip, the tip of her nose, and the bag strap, stronger colouring on the neck scarf, and patterning on the headscarf.
I hope Maria would show the same happy smile if she saw her portrait.
I gave up New Year Resolutions years ago, but I am making a new one this year. I am going to get to grips with my poor drawing skills by doing at least one short drawing every day without using a rubber. I’ve failed already because I didn’t do one on January 1st, but I am going to keep trying! However, I do have other plans and these photos represent my ambitions.
The rose in the centre will make a beautiful watercolour and will help me overcome my inhibitions about painting flowers; I achieved my second acceptable effort in June last year which you can see in my second blog post, so this isn’t something I am hurrying! The garden photos are also destined to be watercolour – it’s good to think of Summer in January here in the UK. Two portraits – actually they will make one painting as they a photos of my friends when young, before they met and married, so this is something of a nostalgic enterprise.
Then there are other directions I wish to explore. I ventured into mixed media last year, not very far in, but enough to see that its not a doubtful means of attaining a result, but a means of expression in its own right. One of my students has produced beautiful pictures following the guidance of this book, so much so that I have bought my own copy to study before attempting something of my own. I like the way the image appears as if rising from the paper itself, a bit like sculptures are said to the in the stone waiting to be freed.
This painting has been on our walls for years – the photo doesn’t do it justice at all. I spend many passing moments wondering how the artist used his paint to such silky effect. The surface is very smooth, the details are precise, the control is awe-inspiring. Finally, I have one or two ideas, and am looking forward to creating my own silky paintings.
I must not forget my Meander book which is needing seven small masterpieces for its tiny pockets. Painting small is another of my bugbears. Happy 2017!
PS Just received my “Paint” magazine from SAA – and they are running a drawing Challenge this year. how Serendipitous is that!
It helps to read the picture by getting the darks in, so I roughed in the dresser, the chair and the wellies.
I had feared that the dresser would dominate the picture, but in the event, the two figures in their rich robes were not going to be overcome by anyone!
It was at this stage I stumbled across my major puzzle – relative size! I had photographs of many of the objects, but their size in relation to each other was problematic. Brian’s Cup had a couple of wine glasses in shot, and Martin’s antique glasses and wine bottles were displayed together. But, how tall was the dresser in relation to the figures, and how wide? and what about the fishing paraphernalia? I had a fishing catalogue with good photos in it but the size of the items in relation to each other, never mind in relation to the figures was not obvious. Also working on a canvas this size meant that everything was not under the eye at once.
I thought it would be good to add colour to check the tonal balance and it certainly shows how the colours are affecting each other. But it also shows the size mistakes more clearly – no bad thing, but a bit disconcerting. So you can see Giant’s wellies (right next to Brian’s neat feet!) a soup plate reel, a fishing rod like a tree trunk, a very spindly, somewhat inebriated chair, and a decided dip in the middle shelf as it goes behind the picture. I don’t think those books would sit easily in the hand, either.
This is a copy of a painting from my book, “The Bridges of Dee”, called “The Great Curve”. I was surprised by this huge curving wall on one side only which is an extension of the parapet of the Thirteenth Century bridge over the Dee between Farndon and Holt. I had been prospecting (for a commission) for a different view of the bridge- I have painted it so many times – and, as I walked down the bank, a place I rarely go, I saw it. The river was in flood at the time so the whole experience was unusual, but I loved the curve. The commission was for a black and white painting, not my favourite colour scheme, and in the event the prospective patron bought another painting entirely. So I co-opted it into my “Bridges of Dee”. But I have always wanted to do it in colour and this is the first “pass” of the colour edition .
I wanted something kinder, more tranquil, than the drama of the original, and in truth, it has ended up rather dull. However, this is an oil painting so nothing is immutable. The curve is there, but the water is much more reflective, the half drowned bushes greet the sun after a stormy night, blue sky and white clouds offer hope of a better day, so I think I will remove the dark clouds on the right. Indeed, the lighting needs attention throughout the painting.